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Asked at 2012-09-21 10:33:05
This is for a community college in Business class. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus Assignment: Write a discussion paper giving his opinion on how the current economic situation is affecting business in the United States. Also, discuss how you are affected by the current economic situation. 1 -. 2 pages, double spaced MedlinePlus MedlinePlus I know the last paragraph and the conclusion is a little weak, any ideas on beefing up? MedlinePlus MedlinePlus MedlinePlus My paper (draft): MedlinePlus MedlinePlus Current economic conditions have put a blanket of fear in the country. Many people fear that financial markets dropped and the number of jobs will lead to another depression. Although unemployment rates are rising and the crisis in the stock market are made for a difficult year is still not close to what happened in the 1930s. This fear of a recession is what helped the current recession. People are afraid of losing their jobs to start saving your money, when it reduced its spending only increased dismissal requiring businesses. We did the recession but we can fix it. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus Large corporations, "big box stores" have always had the advantage over the smaller, individually owned businesses. With outside investors who have more resources to draw upon when needed. Companies large single objective is to create a profit, often at the expense of the economy involuntary. Sending jobs overseas the cost of labor is cheaper and there is greater perceived benefit. When jobs are taken from our country to decrease the number of jobs available, increasing the number of unemployed. People now can not buy these goods corporation leaving companies with losses. These losses are what made the need for government bailouts in September 2008 so they can keep making their products. The government has to get money from somewhere, however, most taxpayers again leaving people unable or unwilling to make any expenditure that leaves us in a continuous cycle. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus The small business owner without a rich investor to finance their business activities rely on bank loans to start. At the time the mortgage crisis banks were more selective to whom they would give loans, leaving small business owners with few options. Small businesses that are already running are having a harder time making a profit. The company is spending less and small businesses are struggling to stay afloat and many do not. Since in a normal economy only 80% of small businesses succeed beyond their first year is even more difficult in these hard economic times. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus I have the good fortune to be still a high school student living with my parents. This leaves me with very few financial responsibilities. I realize that this economy can not change the time they leave school, and want to be as prepared for it as possible. This education will be a very important role in my future. If you want to succeed in the business world, I have to have a solid college education is capable of dealing with anything that the economy produces in me. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus In general, the current economic situation, companies not favorable. This is why education is an important step in life. If future generations are educated they will be ready to step in and help change the economy for the better. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus Thanks for any constructive critic **.
Answer1KimmiAnswered at 2012-10-02 14:45:04
1) not only affects the United States, which is affecting everyone . MedlinePlus 2) It is compared with the recession of the 1930s . MedlinePlus 3) Use some college level words rather than the words high school to make it look more exemplary . MedlinePlus 4) Throw a little light on "their own experience." MedlinePlus 5) Only these problems and easy to get more than 9 in his essay 10.Btw still impressive .
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