Help,i wrote this letter to bank explaining my tough battle with money situation.Please correct my mistakes?

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Asked at 2012-09-01 00:26:03
(My situation is that I had two jobs, one in the store retail with a commission, another is a bartender.With the ongoing recession, I fired my bar, second job at the store with retail commission sales is terrible .. coz just MedlinePlus My interest rate of the mortgage is 6%, and I would ask the bank to lower interest rate. Because monthly i pay over $ 2500, and been fighting for almost no savings, and the reasons given above
I've been paying partial payments of utility bills, but they have been good to my bank with mortgage payments and always paid on time, in fact, when my mortgage contract started i used to pay $ 200 more, then the usual pay, just to stay ahead of my mortgage payment. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus This is the body of the letter he wrote please correct me if there is something wrong or help me reiterate my prayers, THANK YOU. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus I am writing this letter to explain the unfortunate set of circumstances that have made me become almost delinquent on my mortgage. I've done everything in my power to make ends meet, but unfortunately I have fallen short and would like you to consider working with me to lower the current interest rate on my loan that I have found in the loss of most of my savings.My main goal is to keep my house where I support my sister and my parents who support me at home in Puerto Rico. The purpose of this letter is to request your kind assistance to help me get through a period of temporary financial difficulties. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus I've been working two jobs to pay my bills, one in the bar, and the second store in the retail of great support to the commission. After being fired from the bar since January 2009, and lost almost half of my commission in another job due to bad market, my income has been reduced significantly, even forced me to give up my car last week. Shortly after losing almost all my savings for now, I fell more and more behind my utility payments which have been making partial payments since February 2009. MedlinePlus I even tried to sell the house, but the price has dropped considerably. MedlinePlus Now,
Answer1VISHNUAnswered at 2012-09-07 10:15:03
Certainly we are all experiencing financial difficulties , and never will, but him , but other than that , it looks good .
Answer2MykAnswered at 2012-09-12 03:41:06
I'm pretty sure that the text is fine, all you need to change what I can see are the selves ( when you say things like me, I must be a capital letter ) , and there are a few places after the commas and points where you need to put in a space.
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